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PostSubject: Young Lady Yanesa of Fort Hold   Fri Dec 12, 2014 11:19 am

:: OOC Information ::
Moniker: Svet
How did you hear about us?: Affiliation with Seraden Weyr



:: Character Information ::
Name:
Yanesa

Pronunciation:
Yah-neh-s-ah

Title:
Lady

Honourific:
N/A

Age/ Turn of Birth:
17 / 485

Gender:
Female

Place of Birth:
Ista Sea Hold

Place of Residence:
Fort Hold

Craft:
None

Occupation/ Role:
Lady / Betrothed of young Lordling Kier of Fort Hold

Character Aspirations:
She wants to prove that she can be the best wife for Kier and she will never let him go. She wants to show that she is able to live at Fort Hold, no matter where she was born.

Family:
Father: Melarik {Lord Holder of Ista Sea Hold, B. 458 AL, D. xxx AL }
Mother: Tarela {Lady Holder of Ista Sea Hold, B. 463 AL, D. xxx AL}
Siblings: Pelarin [M] {Heir Apparent of Ista Sea Hold, B. 478 AL, D. XXX AL};
Falyn [F] {Gold Candidate at Fort Weyr, B. 480 AL, D. XXX AL};
Sonara [F] {Lady of Ista Sea Hold (secondary heir), B. 487 AL, D. XXX AL};
Children: None
Other Significant: Betrothed to Kier

Appearance:


Face: Nastya Zhidkova
Hair: White-Blonde
Eyes: Gray
Height: 5' 07"
Build: Petite
Other Notable Physical Traits: Like the rest of her family, she has naturally pale skin, but unlike her family, she has a sun allergy.
Style of Dress: Royal garbs with some pink and purple. She does sometimes still where frills and bows.
Possessions usually found on persona: She has a knife that was given to her from her father as a wedding present and stay safe present. She also has pair of glasses that she only uses when she is reading things up close.

History:
485 - 0 She is the second youngest child born to the Lord and Lady Holder of Ista Sea Hold. She started her upraising then to be a prim and proper Lady of Ista Hold. Out of all of her siblings and family members, the only one who she really was around the most a Falyn. She loved to do what Falyn did and she idolized her older sister.
491 - 6 There was a gathering between Fort Hold and Ista Sea Hold and this is when she first met Kier and gained a really big crush on him that never left. She would go around her hold and talk about him all the time. She then also started to blush whenever her parents would talk about Kier to her, which showed her true feelings more and more.
492 - 7 Because Falyn declared that she wanted ot become a dragonrider, she was bypassed for being married off to another Hold. The next child that was able to have an arranged marriage was Yanesa since Sonara was considered to be the secondary heir to Ista Sea Hold.
493-498 - 8-13 During these years, there were more and more gatherings were Yanesa and Keir met and tlaked to each other. During these gatherings, they got to learn more about each other, which helped Yanesa's crush grow even more. But little did the two of these youngsters know, their parents were making arrangements for a wedding while they connected and talked.
499 - 14 Her parents announced to her and the rest of the hold that she was now betrothed to Kier. This announcement to the entire weyr and every else, made her very happy, and seemed to have her wishes coming true faster and faster right before her very eyes.
502 - 17 She was finally able to move to be with her betrothed Kier at Fort Hold. With her she brings her clothing, and a possession that she will never let from her sight. She is sad to leave her family, but she is happy to finally be with the one whom she has been crushing on for turns. Her family really wanted her to move because of the Hurricane that hit. They didn't want her outside all day with her allergy and chance getting harmed during the rebuilding of Ista Hold. But now that she is at Fort with Kier, she has started to think of the wedding and how to start to plan it now.


Personality:
Hyper For some reason, she is hyper. This mainly happens at night though, but when it does happen during the day, it only really happens when there is a lot of overcast, or the sun is hidden behind something. It is like the sun saps the energy from her when it touches her skin.
Selfish She can be a bit selfish, especially when it comes to Kier. She hates to share his attention with others, but she knows that she has to. But she also hates to share certain items that she has grown attached too, which right now only consists of her father's present to her.
Respectful She will always show respect, and to everyone. She doesn't care if someone has harmed another person, she will show respect. She believes that she should treat others how she would want them to treat her, so she shows this respect and kindness all the time.
Caring She will show her love and care to everyone, but Kier tends to get that side of her the most. She loves him deeply and has a huge crush on him. She wants to be able to help him with everything so that he is not upset.
Strong-Willed Deep down, her will is alive and plotting. She wants to help Kier realize his love for her, but to do this, she has to be able to break all the other expectations that everyone seems to have for her. All she wants, if for Kier to love her, like she loves him.

Shortcomings:
Conceited She tends to like to talk about herself a lot, and she loves to look at herself and take her time to get ready fro something. She likes to make sure that she looks her absolute best, and she wants to be sure that she always has a mirror or something of the likes around so that she can make sure that she still looks good.
Bossy She guesses that this is because of her upbringing. She was raised by a lord holder and she is now betrothed to one, so she should be a bit bossy right? Well there are moments when she will take her bossy attitude and use it either too much, or go a little too far.
Sun Allergy When she was born, she was born with a sun allergy. This allergy only reacts when she is in the sun for too long. But she gets sunburns fairly quickly and she cannot stand to be in the sunlight for too long, which is why she carries parasols.

Mannerisms/ Habits:
When she is worried about Kier, she tends to follow him a lot, but she will stop when asked, sometimes.
Because of her crush on Kier, when she hears his name, she tends to blush really bad, which really shows on her skin.
When she is nervous, she tends to play with a few strands of her hair.

Skills/ Likes:
[Kier]: She has a huge crush on this boy, and she was happy to be told that she was betrothed to him. But she also worries about him because of the fact that he lost his parents at such a young age. She is determined to get him to love her like she loves him, and she will fight any woman for those feelings.
[Singing]: The one craft she would have enjoyed to be apart of would have been Harper, but she can't be a harper. She loves to sing anyways though and she loves to be able to sing about what she wants. She tends to sing about her feelings at times when she is alone, and most of her songs are derived from her crush, Kier.
[Parasols]: When she goes outside during the day, she carries a parasol with her. This is because of her sun allergy. She usually has the parasols match the outfit that she is wearing for that day.
[The Moon]: She is a night owl, and because of this, she has taken a liking to staring at the moon at night. She knows that not many others are up during the night like she is, but she would love to be able to share this romantic scene with her beloved Kier.
[Boats]: Because of her being raised at Ista Hold, she has learned to love to be on boats all the time, and she could even live on one, but she does have her dislikes of them.
[Falyn]: Her older sister has always been her idol. She loves Falyn and when Falyn left to be a candidate, Nesa constantly wrote her, about everything, especially about Kier. She told Falyn what she wanted and how she wanted to be Kier's wife, and she wouldn't be surprised if Falyn convinced her father to betroth them.


Unskilled at/ Dislikes:
[Disrespect]: She doesn't like to hear disrespect and she would never show it either. She was taught with more respect and honor than that, and she doesn't like to be around it. She just wants to be able to show respect to all.
[Crafts]: She once tried her hand at crafting, and failed. She never seemed to have the skills to be a crafter, and well, being a Lord Holder's daughter, she never truly got the opportunity to be a crafter. Her dabbling happened behind her parents backs and she will never tell her who helped her.
[The Sun]: Because she was born with a sun allergy, she doesn't like the sun too much. It is more of the fact that she cannot stay outside for too long or she will get a really bad sunburn. Once her skin is to burn from the sunlight, it takes a few weeks for her to recover fully.
[Her Glasses]: Her eyes are not as great as some would think. She hates her glasses that she has to wear, but she knows that she needs them to be able to read. So she really only uses her glasses when she is reading things up close, other than that, her glasses are hidden on her person somewhere.
[Boats]: Her only real dislike of the boats would be because of her sun allergy. Because a boat is not really protective against the sun, she cannot really protect herself from the one thing that she is allergic to.


Fighting Style/ Weapon of Choice:
A dagger that is hidden in her right boot leg.


Weyrsecond L'mar of bronze Rhodrolth
Weryling A'van of Brown Bharosath
Weyrling Sotiria of Blue Trausth
Weyrling Zerasandra of Green Lethiath
Gold Candidate Lisnada
Young Lady Yanesa
Senior Journeyman Harper Xaviera


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PostSubject: Re: Young Lady Yanesa of Fort Hold   Fri Dec 12, 2014 12:06 pm

haha. She's cute. I know this is still a WIP, but FYI, I put her adoptable thing in your drawing board for now, in case there's more there that you can glean from it for details on her. 

Also, since she's albino, maybe you could consider putting more details in her bio about that, as far as dislikes or "other traits". Such as Doesn't like to be in the direct sun for prolonged periods of time because she sunburns easier than most other people (almost allergic to sun). Maybe she carries a parasol with her when she's outside in the summer months? Also, the eye sight of those with albinism is not the best. They usually have some "photophobia" (bright light sensitivity)and are not able to see as sharply as non albinos. She may need glasses to read, or a magnifying glass to read, which she could carry with her if she finds glasses unattractive. 

Actually ^.^  in my Geography class this semester, there was an albino girl in my class who did this.. she used glasses AND a magnifying stone...kind of a stone with a clear, flattened surface and a rounded top on it -can google "magnifying stone" to see them. The girl in my class seemed to do alright without her glasses sometimes when she wasn't reading, but it was definitely a must for her, for anything up close. Though I suppose this could be to varying degrees based on the individual. Still, it might be something to work into her bio to make her even more unique ^.^ Or maybe something that she's kind of self-conscious of. That sort of thing.


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PostSubject: Re: Young Lady Yanesa of Fort Hold   Wed Dec 17, 2014 6:33 pm

Yay! She looks good so far, I think, but just to note-- Kier's parents aren't dead yet, so you might want to point those bits out as future things? Just in case things would be a little different for when they are around Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Young Lady Yanesa of Fort Hold   Fri Jan 16, 2015 1:31 pm

She is done <3


Weyrsecond L'mar of bronze Rhodrolth
Weryling A'van of Brown Bharosath
Weyrling Sotiria of Blue Trausth
Weyrling Zerasandra of Green Lethiath
Gold Candidate Lisnada
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PostSubject: Re: Young Lady Yanesa of Fort Hold   Fri Jan 16, 2015 5:03 pm

Since the rest of her is well fleshed out and already been over the other points, I'll focus on her history now and just use the Turns you used as reference to which line im refering to >D  heheheh. Wink


0-I'd like to know a little about her relationship with her siblings here. At least the PC one. ^.^ Did they have a good relationship? She always look up to her sister? etc etc.


6- When she met Kier, how did they meet? At a gather? at a little intimate but formal ceremony that marked their betrothal? Maybe that's one reason she started to have this infatuation with him -she knew he would be her husband one day and she kind of fantasized about it, like most little girls do. Anyway, I know you'd put she gets betrothed at 14, but, that was just a suggestion that came to mind >D. Sooo I dunno,  you and Jess can hammer out those details, but I figured it's probably worth mentioning exactly how they met, and maybe understanding if that had anything to do with how she feels about him? 


14- Kier's parents have not passed away yet, so will want to amend that little mention.


17- Please detail just a little on why she's moving to be with Kier. Is it because of the hurricane at Ista, because of the destruction and they wanted her to be protected from the hardship of rebuilding or perhaps wanted to protect her from a storm like that in the future? Or some other reason? Maybe planning the wedding now that the young ones are coming of marriageable age? Smile


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PostSubject: Re: Young Lady Yanesa of Fort Hold   Thu Jan 22, 2015 12:48 am

Okay dears, I think I all got of the points that I needed to get in <3


Weyrsecond L'mar of bronze Rhodrolth
Weryling A'van of Brown Bharosath
Weyrling Sotiria of Blue Trausth
Weyrling Zerasandra of Green Lethiath
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PostSubject: Re: Young Lady Yanesa of Fort Hold   Thu Jan 22, 2015 8:16 pm

mkay, well Jess or Kate will need to do a final look over. Probably Kate since she's in charge of who's getting Golds and gold candidates and such. So, soon as she can get to looking at it. Smile


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PostSubject: Re: Young Lady Yanesa of Fort Hold   Sat Jan 24, 2015 8:12 pm

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